Dear Bryan,
While you had done a great job making sure to touch on all forms of
rhetoric, I believe that ethos should have been more heavily focused on in your
topic proposal. Obama had done a great
job trying to rally Americans, while still expressing his plans if elected, but
I think that he had not done a very good job of trying to reestablish his
credibility as our president. Over the
last four years, many people have been unhappy with his accomplishments as
president. In my opinion, he would have
been in a better position if he tried to revive the faith Americans had in him,
rather than just trying to deliver an energetic speech concerning what he would
do with a second term. Although this is
all just my opinion, I believe that ethos should also be elaborated on in your
essay as a possible weak point of Obama’s speech.
Respectfully,
Logan Haman
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